Tuesday, July 15, 2025

Fixing a big mistake


A page from a handmade book with a man holding up his hand, there is a woman behind who is barely visible.
I mostly like this page, but the arm of the woman behind the large hand is bothering me.

For all the wonky drawings that I accept as fine, this one was not fine. I spent 3 weeks thinking about what to do (and working on other pages). I could just glue more eco dyed paper over the part I didn't like, but it would stand out as being glued on.
Drawing over the arm with white ink made a mess, but it did lighten those lines.

Fixing a part of a collage I am unhappy with, here I have printed over the bad drawing with some paint.
I made a stencil and printed a thin coat of pale titan buff on the areas that were bothering me.


Abaca paper with coffee splats was cut to fit the shape and glued down.
Then I glued coffee splattered abaca paper on the offending area.

Another arm was collaged on.
A new arm is collaged on. Maybe it's too short? I think his arm and shirt need a pattern.

A page in a book by Judith Hoffman, with some changes made to the man with a raised hand.
Sometimes this looks okay, sometimes I am not happy with it. I'll put it away for a while.
 
Here I have extended the aura around his neck. I also added shrubs and another arm for the woman. I feel the sleeve needs something. Check out this recent post Jane Davies recently did about a change she made in one of her paintings. She has a very good attitude toward making changes, and she is skilled at it. I agonized over every step here, feeling bad that I had made this mistake. I need to take Jane's approach. And if I can make mistakes and correct them I will feel more okay with experimenting.

 

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